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Re: Random Vampire Book Ch3
Okay, so this was good. My only problems were with cars. You see, the first part, when he's standing in the road, and 'miraculously' no one crashes...well that just seems ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: Random 2nd Chapter
This is amazing!!!! Truly awesome! I love your character telling the story! It's so realistic I find myself checking for a heartbest(okay maybe not, but it's great). I think I'd ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Random First Chapter
Amazing! I loved it! It's so...descriptive. But in a good way. Not like Harry Potter where it take four pages to describe a smell. Ugh. Even though werewolves are more ...
Apr 11, 2010
