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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Psychosomatic: Chapter 2

    Chapter 2 The next morning, I walked into the hallway outside my new room and realized it was decorated. There were pictures on the walls and a table with purple ...

    May 2, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Random Vampire Book Ch3

    Okay, so if he has to drive, maybe give him some more expeience. That seems to work better. I really like this. :)

    May 1, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Psychosomatic: Chapter 1

    Chapter 1 “Oh, yeah. You are my favorite hot mess.” Alex murmured in my ear, careful not to let my mom overhear. I slid out of his arms and shot ...

    Apr 29, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: First chapter to my werewolf story--Ayden!

    Chapter One It started the same way it always did. I was brushing my teeth when all of the sudden I looked up to spit—and I couldn’t see. My vision ...

    Apr 27, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Random Vampire Book Ch3

    Okay, so this was good. My only problems were with cars. You see, the first part, when he's standing in the road, and 'miraculously' no one crashes...well that just seems ...

    Apr 27, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Psychosomatic: Prologue

    Thanks! Everyone who's read this has said "OMG it's great!" But I need crticism. So, yeah. I like your suggestions, and will take them. I know I was kind of ...

    Apr 27, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Psychosomatic: Prologue

    Okay. So this is a prologue of sorts for a different story I've written. I titled this one 'Psychosomatic' for varius reasons, the main being that it means 'all in ...

    Apr 24, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Chapter 10 to my werewolf story!

    (I really don't like this chapter. Please be kind and help me.) Chapter Ten The next day was agonizing. But not as bad as I knew Tuesday would be. Monday, ...

    Apr 23, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Random 2nd Chapter

    PM me too:)

    Apr 21, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Random 2nd Chapter

    This is amazing!!!! Truly awesome! I love your character telling the story! It's so realistic I find myself checking for a heartbest(okay maybe not, but it's great). I think I'd ...

    Apr 20, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Chapter 9 to my werewolf story!

    Chapter Nine Isaac let out the softest bark that I knew only Finn and Mareck would hear, even if others were in the woods, then he took off for the ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Chapter 8 to my werewolf story!

    (Okay, this is where some of my playlist comes into play. The last part would be Starlight. Enjoy.) Chapter Eight My dream started out that way it had for months. ...

    Apr 18, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Chapter 7 to my werewolf story!

    (This one happens to be my favorite--sorta. It's got some elements I enjoy. I hope you do too.) Chapter Seven “Stop,” Marshall called to me, seeing that I was more ...

    Apr 14, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Random First Chapter

    Uh, when did I ever say anything about Twilight? I like Harry Potter. The books just took so long to get through.

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Random First Chapter

    Amazing! I loved it! It's so...descriptive. But in a good way. Not like Harry Potter where it take four pages to describe a smell. Ugh. Even though werewolves are more ...

    Apr 11, 2010


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