KerushiiAi

Yeah, I didn't really like the ending of it much myself either >_> That's one of the things I wanted to improve on, I'm just not exactly sure how... To ...

I wasn't sure where to post this, since it's not exactly fiction... It's something I wrote to help me with...some things. I don't know. But it's something that happened in ...

Hi! I felt that this was good as a first chapter; you introduced characters (though we don't know the narrator's name yet), a setting, and even a bit of a ...

Hello! So this is half of the story? Or just half the first chapter? All the same, it was good, but there are a few things I would fix. Something ...

This is a short story I wrote for my English class close to a year ago. We were given a theme to follow and this is what I came up ...

Yeah, this really made me want to read on. You said it's really rough, but I think it's very good already. There wasn't much that I'd change but there were ...

This is my first time reviewing something so I hope I can be some help >_

Thanks! Yeah, I read the FAQ a bit before joining too. Hmm...well I generally write stuff that's got romance but is usually set in the future or the past =/ ...

Hi! My name is Kelsey and I decided to join because...well I like to write and I didn't really have a place to post anything. I heard about this site ...