Kepe

Wow, I think this is going really well so far. It is kind of intriguing because I really have no idea what will come in the next scene. I thought ...

I happen to live in a portion of the country with very active, non-fat people, and I believe there are many people in their right proportions because they are active. ...

I loved that book! I read it last year, and I cried. The story has really stuck with me.

Wow, those pictures were so beautiful! Plus it totally looked like Texas, or at least the trees did. Great job!

In general, your flow was good. It was easy to see the individual personalitys of each character. The only thing I really had a problem with was the last part ...

This is a good poem, it had heart. Just to comment a little on the style of the poem, at the beginning of the poem you let the lines hang ...

I liked it, especially the fact that you made the cell phone have a voice without saying anything. Also I think just about everyone can relate here. Personally, it reminded ...

Glad you're the one fixing it and not me. Thanks for the update.

Only like 70 pages. I am easily distracted.

banned for not caring about grammar.

No, I think it was the section about treatment of the Jews, and the fact that most of the guys names ended in -us. Very Roman, or very Latin to ...

I do like your story, especially near the end. I do have few little bones to pick, so please bear with me. "Smooch! Alexius kissed me." Okay I just thought ...

The bag is so incredibly cool! and Areida is right- You do look like a writer.

I liked the fact that you could see her silhouette among the light. Very interesting.

ohh scary. I still thought they were kinda neat, even if your program was over the hill.