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I thought this chapter did a lot for character development, and (I don't know if you meant to do this or not) it really felt like Griffin was picking out ...

The way you manipulated the pictures was cool. Wish I could do that. :-)

I LOVED the play on the stereotype. I loved how you put it in the view of the stepmother, and pretty much everything. There was only one sentence that stuck ...

I LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE this book! Probably one of the most amazing books of all time! Atticus is awesome, Scout is a perfect character. For me the bes

Title suggestion. Something with 'dragon' in it, but something that doesn't sound as cliche as A Dragon's Story. Example: Dragon Smoke. I think you get the idea, but it is ...

Once again I like where this story is headed. We got to see a different, more sleepy, side of Sam, and I liked how you ended it with Griffin. Okay ...

I was randomly searching the internet. I typed in "Young Writers" and this is what I found.

Well I have very mixed feeling about the trilogy. I loved some of his original concepts (daemons, aleitheometer etc) however as a Christian I naturally disagreed with all of his ...

My favorite English teacher told me to always show and not tell. I know that is an average run-by-the-mill sort of tip, but I find it works beautifully.

Well I did think it would fit into the book, however it was a bit predictable. Stephanie Meyer left out description about that time because, well, we all knew what ...

Topic: way overused, unfortunately. The problem with using an overused topic is that everyone has something better to compare it to. Try adding your own original streak to spice it ...

Overall I liked your story, you do need to be careful when showing the good and bad reactions it sometimes seemed a little chopped up. I also just noticed a ...

Wow, that was funny- especially the charlie scene. The gun part is the only part I wasn't a real fan of, but then the part about Charlie and the gun ...

Well I am not really sure how to take this. I can't criticize it because, well, you said it was just a joke in essence, but as far as the ...

I agree that your rhyming is very interesting, I also like your topic because I think a lot of people can relate to it, however you do need to work ...