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Normally I am not a fan of poetry written in this style, but I think you pulled it off. Though this has already been pointed out many times, "Then girl ...

It was not too long, rather average actually. In fact, I wanted to read more. I am not particularly adept at grammar, but I did not notice anything. So 'yea' ...

Okay, so I read it and just tried to add in the punctuation. The story is really stiff feeling. You said, "Class, today we have the honor to say that ...

Wow, I have never heard of that theory. Sounds a little far fetched, but is certainly worth looking in to.

I kinda had fun reading it. Sounded like a classic children's ditty.

Everyone loved Mary; she was homecoming queen, captain of the Cheer leading squad, and daughter of the police chief, but Mary had a secret. That would be just about the ...

I liked the starkness of your poem, however I really wanted you to prove what you were saying. Good poetry should fill the reader with a picture of the hopelessness, ...

I love this book, it is charming, witty, and manages to teach a lesson on the nature of mankind all at the same time. *warning spoilers ahead* I love the ...

The problem was that it isn't very poetic. There is no rhythm, and the word pictures seem to be cliche and overused. As Wozzell said, I can't really figure out ...

"I don't know why priests, conservatives, and Republicans in the US are complaining about sex in today's youth and culture. Have they read the "Song Of Solomon"?" That would be ...

I really liked the imagery you used in your story. I particularly liked the part about the sea being a symphony it provided a beautiful picture of ocean sounds. It ...

I really liked the first one. Felt like a prison, or someone who feels like their life is a prison and thus keeps their room a blank slate.

I love ducks! Everyone else is right, though: It needs more lines. Particularly a wing line.

This was a great tutorial. As a person with only 'paint' you have made me really want photoshop.

Well my experience is very limited, but I will tell you my story anyway. So I am a Christian, and at the time I was going to a CMA (Christian ...