Kepe

Well to start I have to say that I am not thrilled with any of the candidates. I think that anyone who would make a really good president isn't stupid ...

I tend to view it as more choice than anything, but I would also not be surprised if some people were more tempted in that direction than others. People can ...

It really didn't seem very poetic. If you had taken the lines out it would have been a story, or an intro of sorts. Other than a few word pictures, ...

Well, it was rather blah. This may be a bit harsh, but I really found your structure to be rather boring. I mean, I get it: you hate it. I ...

Well, Ten just about said it all, but I have just one little thing to add. You said, " Meg Argentia happened to be her arch enemy at the high ...

Yes, you should re-read it. Every time I pick it up I seem to find something different, or some other delight that I failed to notice before. The Iliad is ...

Poetry is supposed to be a creative expression of your feelings, thoughts or experiences. Twit is right, this isn't really poetry You have a thought. You 'hate' this person, but ...

You need to put structure into your poem, and please get ride of the smiley faces, they are very distracting. This didn't feel like a poem, and I think you ...

Those were really good parts. I particularly loved the part where he first introduced Helen, because he never described her face, only other people's reactions to her. I felt like ...

So all in all the story was sad, but if you want to make it fantastic you have to let us get to know the characters a bit more and ...

So when I first read 'goblin ninja' I was kinda thinking that you had managed to wrap two overused, cliche character types and mix it into one, however as the ...

Maybe this is a bit optimistic of me, but I think he has a chance of saving the series if the third one is really good and really original. Was ...

I was very surprised to find that I actually enjoyed this book. You are able to witness the tragic flaws in all of the characters, and ultimately the pointlessness of ...

I had to read it for school, and was very surprised to find that I enjoyed it.

All the boys in my class are obsessed with those books! Wow, I now want to read them...