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Re: Chapter One - Saved
Thanks for the review! Second chapter is up!
Aug 1, 2014 -
Re: Chapter One - Saved
Thanks for the review! Second chapter is up!
Aug 1, 2014 -
Re: Chapter One - Saved
Thanks for the review! Second chapter is up!
Aug 1, 2014 -
Re: The Scarlet River
thank you for the review! constructive criticism is always the best! I'm wondering if it would help the reader understand the poem if they knew what it was about?
Jul 13, 2014 -
Re: The Stash - Chapter 2
I fall more in love with this story with every word. The writing is impeccable. Also, you must not be from the US huh? That's awesome! I didn't notice many ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: The Stash - Chapter 1
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Jul 7, 2014
I genuinely enjoyed this! It's weird, but I love stories that involve drugs. You're writing is fantastic! The only thing I have to say is that in some places you ... -
Re: That Summer
Thank you for your review! Your advice was really helpful. I will definitely go back and try to fix the weak points. Maybe I need to make this a bit ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: That Summer
thank you very much! i'm glad you enjoyed the story. I'm not sure why I put her descriptive paragraph where i did...just seemed to be the only place i could ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: Making Words Rhyme Within A Pattern Is Called A Poem, Even When It's Out Of Context And Has A Ridiculously Long Title
I thought this was funny. A poem has never made me laugh before. The title makes it about ten times better.
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: There She Sat
This is truly beautiful. I loved it. You're very descriptive with your words, and it made me feel as if I was watching the scene from a distance. You have ...
Jul 6, 2014
