KelsRich1

That was really cute! I loved the imagry and the way you describe the way the bee moves. I never thought about it like "jamming to tunes" hahah. Keep it ...

This was really good! I liked that the conflict was so original and unique. My favorite part was the ending; I love a good twist like that. Personally, I like ...

Home I have only lived in one place my entire life. The 1300th house on Churchill St. has been my home for close to 15 years now. It’s the little ...

I really enjoyed this story. It was interesting and I really liked the voice of the narrator. It was unique. The only thing that wasn't that great was the ending. ...

This was great! I love how you used the meter and rhyme scheme. :) -Kels :P

Floating on an ocean of black, Cushioned by a blanket of stars. My world revolving, Around nothing but you. Warm smiles of silver, Beaming down to earth. Gently kissing the ...

Wow. I loved it! :) The only thing that I found odd was the form on the word "began" in the last line. Maybe I'm wrong but I don't think ...

This poem is really intense. I like it! :) The only thing that bothers me is the first line. It;s written in old english while the rest is more modern. ...

Well, that was really entertaining. I thought it was very well written and really really funny. Bob sounds really cool :D -Kels ;)

I really liked this poem! I think it is really relatable because I'm pretty sure a lot of poeple have similar experiances. I like that despite the fact that it ...

I really like this poem. The way you capture the essence of the ballerina is lovely. There are a few gramatical errors that I noticed but I think everyone else ...

Waves of wrath, like stampeding elephants, charge. They engage in battle. With every crest – another blow. Crack of lightening. Rumble of thunder. Drowning me. Leaving nothing but wreckage in ...

You are very right Rach! I am officially a writer! :) As of now I write in all genres. I'm exploring my writing skills at the moment so we'll see ...

Hey my name is Kels! I'm so excited to be a part of this website! I hope to be a writer when I grow up so I'm looking for some ...

I want to be a bird. Nothing would make me happier, Than to fly away. To open my wings and soar through the heavens, gliding on air and That wild ...