KelsRich1

This was very cute. It was almost metafiction, which I like. I liked how the piece was short and sweet, some tend to drag on and on. Sorry this is ...

Your grammar was dead on, unless I missed something haha. So good job. I liked this poem it was cute. :) -Kels :D

I LOVED THIS! I really like how you took the original narration, third person omniscient, changed it to first person with Juliet. There were a lot of really great metaphors ...

I like the way this poem flows. It feels like you're in a crash as you read it. It's a really cool effect. There were some grammatical errors. Sometimes it' ...

I liked this poem. I liked how you compared the storm to baking and typewriting. I also like how you used caesura and enjambment throughout the poem. It made the ...

We can welcome each other! :) And good luck with the novel writing. Keep it up and you'll win eventually! -Kels :)

This is a good poem. I liked it. If you want help with grammer on a poem the best way to do it is write it like a regular paragraph ...

This poem is very powerful. Maybe work on clarifying certain parts PM me and we can go into details. Sorry this review is so short I'm in a rush but ...

This was a great poem! I really liked it. The only thing that was a little off to me was that there were a lot of run-on sentences. I do ...

This was a good poem but the rhyme scheme was a little weird. It changed throughout the entire poem and it kind of threw me off when I was reading. ...

WOW! That was a really good story. I know this is going to be a pointless review but I didin't really find anything wrong with it. There wern't any gramatical ...

This was cute and it had a nice meter in the begining. However, some words needed a space between them that they did not have. For example: "cheersengulf" I realize ...

This is a poem for all those summers at the beach. For the days we spent walking up and down the sandy sidewalks in town. For our little sand castles ...

Oh.My.Gods. This was really fun to read. I like how you're using May, a lot of poeple do something with Percy and Annabeth and truthfully, it just gets old. Anyway, ...

Oh my gods! A cookie and Harry Potter!?! If only Ron were there....hahah. Anyway it was really cute and funny. I would just edit the ending a little. Maybe make ...