Kelcia

Simon and Susa Simon and Susa simultaneously drew their new daggers. Even though Simon didn’t know how to use the weapon, some primal instinct rejoiced in having a sharp bit ...

That last sentence didn't make much sense at all, Aspiring... And the only reason I posted was because Ray said that someone should post, but I honestly had no idea ...

Alex Baker Huffelpuff Alex stared around the room. It appeared that Kale really had gone over to the dark side. Why else would he be standing at his ease, while ...

It sounds pretty good! I agree, the second plan would be more fun. (For me, at any rate. :lol: ) So, if we go with the second plan, Alex has ...

I'm a little intimidated. If I post before Riders and Ray work this out, I could confuse the story line. But if I don't post, we'll just sit here until ...

Hi! I like the first bit - about the man and the mirror. It adds some mystery to the whole thing. I have a few suggestions, though. He tries to ...

Hiya! This is very good. Second person stories are hard to pull off, but you managed this one pretty well. I think, if you switched into first or third person, ...

I'm glad you all reviewed my poem. I've made the rhyme scheme changes you suggested - The first and third stanzas now have the same (or at least very similar) ...

Simon and Susa Susa hopped into the wagon and looked around. There were, indeed, two unopened canvas packages in the corner. “C’mon, Si,” she said excitedly, “Let’s see what Luke ...

Ah, I see. Hm. I'll see what I can do about my post! (Glad you like the name, LD. :D) *Edit* - Okay, it's all fixed now!

Simon and Susa “Well,” began Susa, “we figured out how the royal family was killed. That was easy, if unpleasant.” “The King was poisoned,” said Simon promptly, as if he ...

*How's about going into London, for a start? Then heading out into the suburbs, and, um, figuring something out from there? We could, like, I dunno.... We'd be too large ...

Personally, I think that a magical sub-plot could be very interesting. It would mean, if I interpreted your writing correctly, Sylverdawn, that there will be just one more group of ...

-The Banners Torn *Edited January 12, 2010* *** In broken heart, banners fly torn With wind in moor and fife and horn Awaken! Awaken! Your time has arrived! The ghosts ...

Simon and Susa Simon finally understood. He had been confused ever since he had been thrown in the dungeon, but now he understood. He could almost forgive Luke now, and ...