Kelcia

Sad but nessisary. Kale has to go. He's holding up progress by not posting. I vote "Aye."

I'll do it.

Not happy about this. I've been checking this stupid thing every day, and we're all held up because one person is'nt posting! I say, don't kill it officially, we just ...

The story telling was my favorite part! I like the idea of a black wolf; it's original, and makes the reader want to know more. One thing I noticed, and ...

*Thats good organizing, LD. Very clever, and nicely handled. Hmmm... We'll see what happens then, won't we?* Simon and Susa Susa sniffed as the small group stood at the fork ...

*Eyebrows raised way up* And you felt the need to tell us this... why?

Oh, I'm sure they'll turn up. It hasn't been that long.

Honey, I'd stick to talking rather than posting until we sort this thing out.

...Yes?

Aspiring, we were in a room with Chuck, Kale and a load of Death Eaters. You apperated us into Gringots without any transition. Does that sound... I don't know, feasible ...

Heh. Sorry. ^_^* It just seemed in character... I'll avoid it from now on. *hurries off to edit posts* All edited!

I'm here! :xd:

Runner “Are you coming, or what?” Runner called back to the two men. “I don’t have to save you. You know that, right?” She heard some muttering from a little ...

Very nice. I enjoyed all the details - the discriptions of her riding especially. I have a couple suggestions, though. In the beginning, when she's getting ready to ride Gira ...

Simon and Susa As the fight began, Simon circled around to the back of one dim-looking robber while Susa held the man’s attention. “So,” She said, flipping her hair out ...