Keitaron777

Would you mind review the prologue of my novel? Please and Thank You!!

Will you please review the prologue of the novel i'm working on? Much appreciated thank you!!

Will you comment on the prologue of my new book i'm starting? I would really appreciate it!!

Ok, Found this story very entertaining. Why? Because it combines two of my favorite things: Harry Potter and cookies!! Seeing as this is a joke I don't really have anything ...

Jack had never been a patient man. Even with straight instructions to wait where he was, only thirty minutes later he found himself following a trail of blood that had ...

Keitaro stopped at Sakura's house which was right down the street. Sakura. Sakura was Keitaro’s entire life. Her shimmering eyes reminded him of emerald orbs. Every time he looked into ...

I really enjoyed your story, but i think you could have been a little descripted

Is the part about icarus and icaria true? i'd like to find out. I love anything mythology related so your story had me captivated

What happens!!!!!!!????!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?! you know you really cna cut this off here, you're going to make a lot of people mad by leaving them hanging

If i see one more story about a vampire i swear............... but it wasn't a half bad story nice job

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Short but interesting, im very excited to read the rest. There is more right? right? If there isn't moerthan how am i supposedto find out what in hte box!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I really enjoyed this, the way you describe the way the character is works perfectly for the situation used here, I really hope you keep writing!

Wow, this is a truly utterly bueatiful story, I've never read anything like it, a man trying to kill the love of his life its very sad yet it brings ...