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Re: I say I hate you,
I liked it very much because it gave me an image that popped up in my head^_^. -dances- I love the title. I expected more though because of what I ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Possible Storybook Approval System
I'm new but I'm all for it for my own reasons. Just saying.=\
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: Apocalipse
So I'm lost but that's okiedokie. Clair had ran to high ground when the girl told her friend's house had been destroyed. She just ran and ran, threw her books ...
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: Apocalipse
"It's fine. I didn't meant to snap." she sighed looking around and at the two girls. "What's going on anyways. Why is everyone running and screaming. Why are they running ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Apocalipse
Walking along the sidewalk in the streets of L.A., Clair hummed the tune of a song that was stuck in her head. She had her books squished between her arms ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Apocalipse
So we can go ahead and start? So can I go along with ghost's story? If not and you don't want me to, I can edit my post. Clair had ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Apocalipse
-whispers- I think we need a place to discuss about the story thingy. Although I would love to start now but anytime is okiedokie with me.
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Apocalipse
((so this is interesting=])) Name: Clair O' Hara Age:18 Occupation: Student Appearance: Shoulder length brown hair with short layers. Green eyes. 5'3 and slender. Personality: Playful and a joakster b
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: The Carver's Melody
Onomatopoeia=]. It was a school assignment by the way and thank you very much.
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: The Carver's Melody
Scrape, scrape, scrape. The sound of a carver sharpening his knife weaving in with the tap, tap, tap, of his worn out, well traveled, shoes sitting flat on the squeaky ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: appraoching storm
I really liked this poem, really liked it. The rhyming scheme flowed very well and created a nice rhythm. I saw some alliteration also ("do dim to dorm")! I always ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Everytime I look at You
I really liked this poem! I got a great meaning from it. I noticed a few errors but the others have already pointed them out^^. Just wanted you to know ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Some Where Out There
First of all I liked this peice and that is because of the meaning that I got from it. I didn't get that big of an impact from the meaning ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Sorcerer's Academy
((Edit: so I'm not at school so I will post now. Mia's animal's name is Noo..you know..like boo=] ..)) Mia stood looking at the grounds of the place. A soft ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Sorcerer's Academy
**Is it too late to still join? I'm going to go ahead and post my character, if it's too late to join, I'm sorry.** Name -Mia Age -15 Gender -Female ...
Apr 8, 2008
