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Keeley

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prologue - Please Don't Rest Tonight

    That really was wonderful. You had my attention the whole time. Like other reviewers have stated, the use of the word archaic stuck out a bit, but I like your ...

    Jul 14, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prologue - Untitled

    Wow, this is very, very good. I was a bit thrown off at the narrator "not knowing" she was going to a mental institution until she was there. It made ...

    Jul 14, 2008


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