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Re: The Imagination of Lily Barton Chapter One
This is extremely long and I thank anyone who sticks with it all the way through. I can't wait to hear your responses! Chapter One A Very Strange Birthday Lily ...
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: Prologue - Please Don't Rest Tonight
That really was wonderful. You had my attention the whole time. Like other reviewers have stated, the use of the word archaic stuck out a bit, but I like your ...
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: Hey, I'm new.
Hey everyone! Just wanted to stop by and say hi since I'm new here. I have a novel I've been working on for years and I can't seem to get ...
Jul 14, 2008 -
Re: Prologue - Untitled
Wow, this is very, very good. I was a bit thrown off at the narrator "not knowing" she was going to a mental institution until she was there. It made ...
Jul 14, 2008
