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Re: A Boy In the Sand.
...scrambled backwards but tripped and fell back into the sand. The second 'back' in that sentence should probably be replaced with something different. Because of the 'backwards' beforehand, it makes
Feb 18, 2009 -
Re: Through Hazel Eyes Chapter 1 PT. 1
...carving my hands on shards of glass... I like this comparison very much, but I think it needs more. Carving what into your hands? Shapes? Lines? I've got to figure ...
Feb 17, 2009
