Kaywiia

In a way you can, if both people are online. You can use PM (personal message) to do this. Just go to the little PM symbol under their name to ...

Hello, Welcome to The Young Writers Society. I am Kally. Just a few suggestions: Read and follow the rules. Take others comments into consideration. And write what you want to, ...

You really stay away from the twilight idea here, I like that. This is a really good continuation of your story, and I am just waiting for her to see ...

I was able to make my own educated opinion Okay, this was nice, but take out 'educated' lex majoris partis Is this a mispell or latin? In summary, I believe ...

I love the cats mellow personality, it really adds to the story! I think overall this is a good story and deserving of praise. PM me when you write the ...

Note, I am not trying to sound conceited! I actually can do most anything you ask me to for a literary work. I can offer words of kindness. I can ...

I think the story telling idea worked out well! It provides information without shoving it in the readers face or boring them with paragraph after paragraph of unnesisary information. I ...

This was a very good riddle, and i spent a good five minutes trying to figure it out. (Then i cheated and scrolled down to see if someone posted it). ...

That story had me interested from sentence number one. Good Job! For a name, I think Ebony would suit the girl, don't you. Maybil and Lacole seem to fit as ...

Hey Readers, I have recived some very exciting news. I am going to be a published author soon. A publisher accepted my book. I am nineteen and love piano, dance ...

This was a wonderful poem, and it grabbed my attention off the bat. I knew it would be something special from the first line, and truly I love it. It ...

Please PM me if you continue this story, it is fascinating. You could do well with this piece. Honestly if I were you I would consider publishing this. Just a ...

Here is a general idea: I may feel alone in life, but words on a page will tell my story. Long after I die, they will be there. Life is ...

This was very good, in the next chapter have the girl remember everything. That would be so interesting. Honestly your work was gripping, and I loved it. PM me when ...

Do turn this into a novel, and try to publish it. However, make your post shorter. Near the end, i though to myself, is this almost over. Otherwise it was ...