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Shades of Red Red is blood on a battlefield, Where a killed soldier lay. Blood drips on once green grass And it wilts for sadness. But that’s too depressing, Let’s ...

Okay, I am just throwing this out there for an idea. My character, Else, due to the fact she has mixed parents, is unnafected by Kili's ability to change emotions. ...

Name: Elsema (el-sem-ah) she is Else (el-see) for short Age: 15 Power/Circus Act: She can change her density so she plays an escape artist in the circus. She can make ...

Hola! I am here to review! Yay! Okay, First of all, I love it, beyond what you could possibly think! But....did you mean to say vry, or did you mean ...

I know you have a lot to review, and I would be much obliged if you could review this: Silver Blade Chapter Two Fantasy Fiction This is the second chapter, ...

Awwww, this is so sad. I think I might just go and cry. But here is my mega short review *wipes away a tear*: But it is real. Try it ...

This really touched the essence of human faith and I absolutly love it! I felt so many emotions reading this i believe I might need to make up new words ...

This was nice, simple and beautifuly done all at the same time Brava to you! Ciao, Kally

This poem is beutiful, and it actually did something for me. I had beeen trying for years to recall some memories from my old home in Texas, and this brought ...

Okay, the repetition is just my style but thank you for the advice. Yeah, I miss summer too. I wish I could speed up time just a little, or a ...

Hello OverEasy! Okay, I am here to be picky (gasp!) and do a review! She stalked home, What about "she stormed, or she walked, or something because stalk sounds weird ...

It might be months before it comes out because it is still being edited. Inwill inform you when it comes out!

Hi Speakerskat! Okay, some suggestions. 1. This is too short. I would add something like: The sun is shining The grass is green And time just won't wait. So lets ...

In the summer skies A glow begins to appear The sun is setting, setting The summer sun is setting Creating a orange blaze The mother said to her son, “God ...

This was such a beautiful piece, I almost cried when she died. :cry: The tears welled up in my eyes. I have no mistakes to point out so.... good job. ...