Kaywiia

I think someone should take up the point of view of Mark, as well as there own. That would be really interesting because he has become a sort of majoir ...

Carmen "Do you think I went a little to far with that?" I asked Lucian. "Not sure, do you think you killed the two of them?" "I rubbed the blade ...

Anna I got a bit ahead of all of them and arived at a waterfall. "Its so beautiful." I say, staring at it. There is a huge deep, pool of ...

A note, your personality is yourpersonality off screen.... just saying.

Ideas: Option One: Riley's letter makes Jack really mad, and that whole gang is now against the fishers, starting a war between the two. Option Two: The hiding place of ...

Name: Markella D'Nara, (nickname: Mark) Age: 15 Gender: Female Personality: A very sweet, but strong girl. She is very durable and loyal to her friends, a great fighter but hates ...

Amaara I run off to go find Von. I need to see if he happens to have the knife I ordered a while back. I always keep one with me, ...

Anna "Or we could go hiking." I suggested. "I like that idea." Sam said. "Lets do that." Jhonny said. "I am in." said Jackie. "Okay, I guess we are hiking." ...

Riley "Go to mexico." I tell James. He nodds slowly, "That might be for the best." I get out a peice of paper and write down: Jack, James is the ...

Coby I walk slowly through the train, so as not to raise any suspition. I move through the cars. If anyone asks why I am going through the cars, I ...

Riley I walk slowly into the spare house. "I am proud of you." I said to the darkness where James surley was. "Why?" Came a response. "You just left, didn't ...

I am here to critique beyond what is normal or nessisary. Problem One: I won’t lie to you Mother; it truly is a miserable life, here. Delete the coma after ...

Has everyone forgotten this?

Carmen "Run!" Coraline screamed. That was not what I needed. I gave the signal to Lucian and he ran in with his gun loaded. Vincent called to me, "I thought ...

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