Kaylyn

Cute pic. 8/10.

1. Is China a 'rogue state'? Who are we to judge another country? By our standards, they ahve their own. 2. Should China be persuaded to lend money to countries ...

Ai, I was in 4th grade when the twin towers fell. The US did declare war on terriorism. Okay terrorists came down and bombed and killed lots of Americans. Innocent ...

Their not a minority. Thats the last I'm going to say on the subject because this is techinally about racism.

Welome to YWS! Christopher Paolini is one of my favorite authors too! Make sure that you check out the Rules and Guidelines. I'm sure that I'll end up seeing your ...

Oh, I love Fahrenheit 451 also. By the way welcome to YWS, Haruno Sakura and Maghan. I can't wait to see the pieces you post here. Check out the Rules ...

Hiya, I'm glad that you found YWS. Its always nice to meet someone new. I love reading and writing fantasy fiction. So hopefully, I'll get to see one of your ...

Looking Glass They have a special folder in my profile. Please review. Thanks.

It sn't exact;y a fairytale ending. They don't get back togather. Well, thanks for the crit on everything Galerius. It was a bit helpful. I know that its a angst ...

There are several "mentally disabled" kids at my school. My brother passed them the other day and overheard their conversation. Heres how it went: Boy 1: Your so retarded Boy ...

They are about even. You know what, blacks are NOT a minority, no matter how long you wan to argue on this subject. Maybe they were 15 years ago but ...

Galerius: last lines are good, i like how you seperated "forever" with the rest of the poem. *gasps* Was that actually a complement? *Looks outside* THE WORLDS COMING TO AN ...

You need some major punctuation. You need to divide up the lines.

This was a great poem. It had a great flow and ryhming scheme. I feel the same way and love the opening lines. I didn't see any grammar mistakes. Great ...

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