Kaylyn

Okay I meant they as Al Queda. Not Iraq. Now, Who was in power in Iraq? Yeah, thats right. Al Queda. Now when when the US takes down the leader, ...

I didn't like the fourth book as well as the first three. I'm not sayong that is wasn't good though.

Our teacher went over the symbolosim in it. Like for example when the boys are killing and torturing the sow, it has been studied and argued that the boys were ...

Congratulations! *mumbles undr breath* I'm soo glad that you got it. :D

These strong walls, Maybe you could out: These four strong walls. Or something. They hold my fury, For some reason the word they dont flow so well. You could rephase ...

Great poem. It was satisfing, it left an impression. I don't see poetry like this very often and its nice to see something different than love and death poems. (I'm ...

The only thing that I have against this poem is that you start way to many lines with I. Vary the sentance structure. It makes the poem, well, boring when ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm glad that you found the site. Make sure that before you start posting that you check out the rules and guidelines. So, what genre do you ...

I can't see any pictures... or follow any links!! What is it?

So heres a complex question: Would you rather two innocent men in prison so free, and eight guilty go free? Or... Would you rather two innocent men go to prison, ...

You say that abortion "is the killing of an individual"; yet you also cliam that "[there] should be admittances" that would make abortion legal in particular cases, such as the ...

Poetry Fight You say I can’t write, Come on, let’s fight. Let’s use our pencils as swords Go on, cast your wards. It’s a battle of words. Get ready, set, ...

Joanna stared at her sister as she passed her. Alla glanced at her too, but Joanna quickly averted her attention to the dirt floor below her. Not wanting her sister ...

[kaylyn said]Okay at 15 days the baby's heart begins to beat. I don't approve of abortion, it is the killing of an individual who has absolutely no choice in the ...

Blacks are only a minority to whites. Thats the only race they are a minority to. Blacks are a majority to every other racial group other than whites. Thats what ...