KaylaCoon

Kayla Here, Soo um what?! I'm so confussed! How does the werewolf thing fit in with the rest of the storty. I supposed I'll just keep reading... Just,,. WHAT?! --Kaylaa

Oh wow. I got goose bumbs. I could feel the emotions in this. I had to read it twice to make sure I wasn't dreaming. This is beautifully written. Just ...

Oh wow. I got goose bumbs. I could feel the emotions in this. I had to read it twice to make sure I wasn't dreaming. This is beautifully written. Just ...

Oh wow. I got goose bumbs. I could feel the emotions in this. I had to read it twice to make sure I wasn't dreaming. This is beautifully written. Just ...

Oh wow. I got goose bumbs. I could feel the emotions in this. I had to read it twice to make sure I wasn't dreaming. This is beautifully written. Just ...

Oh wow. I got goose bumbs. I could feel the emotions in this. I had to read it twice to make sure I wasn't dreaming. This is beautifully written. Just ...

Adding more, what my friend AlizzaBear said, Sam does need more emotions. It seems like you want your readers to like Trevor more. When maybe you should give this kid ...