KaylaCoon

Kayla here!! AHHHH!!!! I love this soo much! Dude the line about her getting locked in the basement made me lol. :) Well to start, I liked how this chapter ...

Kayla here!! So as always this was amazing. I really can't wait to read more. At first I wasn't sure how this werewolf thing would be weird, but to be ...

Kayla here! I liked this. In away you described something amazing in very few words. You created an image or picture with 150 words even though pictures are worth a ...

Kayla here I like this, I think the little added story was good the prolouge. I think the readers need a better chance to get to know the characters bettteerr. ...

Kayla here! As always it's a pleasure to read your stuff. I like this chapter. Mainllyy because it seemed like Harriett might have been a little jealous of Lara you ...

Kayla here! Welll :)) It's awesome as always. Pshhh, :D Her and Aiden are just friends... I'd cry. Well I think again the way you write is great. The characters ...

Kayla here :D let's do this! My dearest Will, Do you remember when we first met? I was seventeen and you, nearing twenty four. That was nearly seven years between ...

Kayla here! I liked this chapter. It wasn't super eventful, but you got to know the characters better and how they act. It's like seeing a different side of every ...

Kayla here! Well like always, it's amazing. And even though in your words, nothing really happens, this is actually what I wanted to happen. I think it's cool she is ...

Kayla here!! Welp, I'm nothing less than impressed. As always your storyy is amazing. The plot is amazing. And you always find something to write about. You're characters are deep ...

Kayla here! Welp, I'm just as impressed as ever! Writing come so natural to you! And you never seem to have a problem with finding anything to say or write ...

Kayla! Welp I liked this your use of descriptions were pretty good. I like the background story and how you explained how everything happened. I liked all the little descriptions. ...

I hobbled into class on Friday morning. My feet felt like they were on fire and I blamed the fact that Cassie had made me wear heels last night. I ...

:D kayla! Ahh inspiring as always! Jeezz! The tension and suspense is growing!! I can't wait to read more ! I can honestly say you have a taleentt! And I ...

Kayla here! :D Alrirghty, I really liked your opening, about her red curls dancing in the wind. It gives the reader a really awesome mental image. The way you described ...