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Re: Take A Chance- 15 (part 1)
:D kayla! Ahh inspiring as always! Jeezz! The tension and suspense is growing!! I can't wait to read more ! I can honestly say you have a taleentt! And I ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: Noobish Greetings. 'Nuff said.
Hey! hope you love the website as much as everyone else! I look forward to reviewing your stuff :D if you have questions or need anything just PM:D --Kayllaa!!
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Dark Secrets chapter 1
Kayla here! :D Alrirghty, I really liked your opening, about her red curls dancing in the wind. It gives the reader a really awesome mental image. The way you described ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 14
Okay!! Kayla here! I randomly decided to check and here it was! Ahhhh!!!! This was suppper! I could litteraly feeel my heart rate increasing. Sorry if things are misspelled it's ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 5
Kayla Here, Soo um what?! I'm so confussed! How does the werewolf thing fit in with the rest of the storty. I supposed I'll just keep reading... Just,,. WHAT?! --Kaylaa
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Eating for Two
Hey Kayla here! Well to start I'm going to say I really liked this. Then add that some more descriptions would be nice. A description of the characters looks and ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter three
Welp Kayla here!! One, I love you signature, All Time Low, is beast :) and so is your story, I love how your main character is soo real. Like she ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter two
Welp Kayla here! I will admit I am a sucker for stories with good bands, guys in skinny jeans, and sarcastic main characters :D You nailed it my friend. I ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes (working title) Chapter one
welp Kayla here! I really like this storyy so far :) I like the over dramaticness. Oh you described the emotions and the conections with the people how you started ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Amazing Grace
hey Kayla here!! So I like this story. Or letter. I loved how you could see what was going on in your mind. The readers could just relate to this ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance.
Heyy Kayla here!!! Welp; I started reading this series and I have to say so far these characters look just like what I imagined. I like the details in the ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
Welp, I'm sad... Kayla here. This piece was emotional and deep and it spoke in it's own way. I liked the little storry at the end but the ending was ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 1
My alarm went off, disturbing the silence that was surrounding me.( I like this line, the disturbing the silence that was surronding me I got up slowly, stretching every muscle ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Her Replica of Amber Kindness (Rewrite!)
Heyy Kayla here!! Welp this deffiantly cought my attention. I really want to read more. I liked how the characters thought on there own. I like the details and thoughts ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Collecting Hearts
Wellpp Kayla here! To start this off I really like the song, and I think you story did it justice. I like how some off the same ideas from the ...
Jun 26, 2011