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This piece of poetry is really good. I like the way it flows and I like the imagery. I did find one edit the last stanza the 'i' should be ...

When the warm sun comes up, And the snow melts away. When the children come out, And find fun games to play. When the birds come back home, The robin, ...

Even though this was a sad poem it made me smile. It fit my taste for poetry. I apologize I have nothing to suggest to improve this poem, because I ...

This poem made me laugh because a few days ago, for Valentine's Day, I was trying to rhyme a word with purple and had no luck. I have reciently found ...

Hello. This piece is really good, but I just have one suggestion. Instead of using contractions I would write the word out. It gives the poem more of a flow, ...

I voted short story because I am currently writing a short story for a creative writing class. It was hard for me to choose between short story and novel because ...

I liked reading this story. It kept my interest the whole time, but I also agree that you should tell more about why this couple was fighting in the first ...

WOW. As I was reading your story I fell in love with it! It was really easy to connect to and includes many common emotions teenagers feel. I especially liked ...

When it comes to writing, I am really shy too. I am also new and feel very comfortable here. I am looking forward to reading some of the things you ...

Hello Eric, I am new here too, and I also enjoy reading what people have to say about my work. It is impressive that you write poetry and I am ...

Hello everyone! My name is Kayde. I am a seventeen year old junior in high school. I have not been writing for very long, but ever since I started, I ...

I really enjoyed reading this. It was sad, but I liked how you said in the spoiler that it is how your soul feels. I frequently write things that show ...