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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Burning Past (makeshift title) A Short Story...

    hot stuffy haze Use commas to separate adjectives in a list. "Hot, stuffy haze" when her sister ceased Awkward phrasing, just saying "ceased". It took me a second to realize ...

    Jul 16, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Me, Manga and Anime

    and my favourite Dragon Ball Z and Pokemon. The way this sentence is phrased, it would need to be "favourites". Otherwise, you'd have to rearrange the order and leave only ...

    Jul 16, 2009


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