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Re: How to Make a Photoshop Avvie
What program did you use again?
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Photography?
I don't know how to delete posts :/ Ignore this!
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: My hearts keeper
“If you fall and break your neck, mother will shot me,” Isabelle protested. I'm sure this is just a typo, but shot should be shoot. But Savannah couldn’t hear the ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Faery Finishing School Chaper 1
Hi! (: I'm going to review you work, but don't just listen to me wait for some people who actually know what they're doing! Please and thank you...Lol. Apparently her ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Seven Souls (Temp. Title)
I walked through the crammed hallway to find the only bathroom in the house, only to find I was too late and there was already a line. Damn, I should ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Prologue to Faery Finishing School
James looked at me with his usual handsome smile and said with a sweeping bow and a very cheesy voice I would seperate the part that desribes his actions, maybe ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Untitled YA
Ace Marka: You don't have to be a grouch! Why don't you learn how to critque, kid. And find my voice? You're fourteen . What do you know about voice?
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Love the sinner
This sounds really good, but I have some suggestions. Yesterday was my most recent hunt. He had no idea it was coming. I wouldn't keep the period there, maybe a ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Abuse
A soft, silent whimper touched the edges of her swollen lips. Tear marks stained her fragile face, and a sticky, salty sweat stretched across her cheeks. She opened her mouth ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Never like a fairytale (edit two)
I really like this story! I have some suggestions though, not many. "Shut up." I think. "Shut up. Remember, the only reason you went out with him is to find ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Untitled YA (1)
Thank you so much! You actually critqued my work, and not the basic stuff. I did agree with most of the stuff that you said. I kind of have a ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Untitled YA (1)
So I decided I’ll go along with it all and continue the generations, and I still haven’t understood the fact directly. But nine days I was to remain human and ...
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Another Sunset. Prologue.
Wow, I really like this prologe. It sounds really good, keep going! PM me if you ever post more.
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: This Is What I Wish I Could Say To You [1]
This is an amazingly emotional story, you're really good at telling stories fiction or non-fiction. The only thing review wise that I have to tell about would be: The day ...
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Climbing out of the pity pot
from the new age of four to the very recent past I had enough crap thrown at me to star in my own soap opera. Okay, this was probably just ...
Aug 4, 2009