KayKel16

I adored that movie! Ever since seventh grade :P I would make the guy who was burned, NOT die. I would prefer that, how about you? *Runs and finds movie*

Hey. I'll review your work for you! I'd love too. I'll have it posted here tomorrow at the most. Can you wait? Edit: Completed. Chapter Two[1].doc

I'll review and have this posted by the end of the day, alright? My review's consist of punctuation, grammar, spelling, and confused sentences. Edit: It's finished.

Even though this is long, I'll review it. Okay? It'll take me awhile, no more than three days. Can you wait that long? If so, I'll definitely review this! I'll ...

I see you're a new member! Welcome to YWS! Don't forget to post your two reviews before you move on to add anymore of your writing. I'm here to critique ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS. I see that you have done two reviews, and you've posted three things. We have a 2:1 ratio, where you post one thing and ...

“This isn’t cold. Sleeping soaked from head to toe at the dead of night with only pair of pants and an AK47 in the middle Siberian snowstorm is cold. This ...

Name: Kaylynn(: (First letter of my name spelled out, and middle name.) Age: 16! Fav book && YES ONE: No favorite book. Fav author: No favorite author. Fav food: None ...

It was 7:00 o clock in the morning and the sun shone through the beautiful crystal windows in the living room. When giving time, it should look like this: Eight ...

Gosh, why did they invent Mondays, I thought drearily. Italicize 'Gosh, why did they invent Mondays'. It will separate those thoughts, from the others. "Aaaaw!" "No, I don't believe this!" ...

After a month or two instead of staying inside and talking he took me on a walk around town. Comma after talking. When we were almost getting to the gate ...

He smoothed out the sandy dirt that lay around him. He opened his eyes, and with great effort sat up. Can I recommend a rewrite of this sentence? If so, ...

"excuse me, but I need to check us in, so if you could move out of the way, that would be great." You need to capitalize excuse. Then after in, ...

"She should have been more careful; she should have paid more attention; she shouldn’t have gotten distra –" I don't think you should use semicolons as much as you have ...

“Two lasagnas and lemonade por favor,” Justin ordered for me. We’ve been here so many times in the years we’ve dated we even know most of the employees. Alright, here ...