KayKel16

Hi, I'm here to critique quickly. ________ Oh yea I was badass, and yet here I am. Don't use text talk in your writing, use the yeah with an H. ...

Hey there, I'll be your reviewer since no one has reviewed your work. _________ There were, as I had expected, Goosebumps now plastering the arm, but the shock was great ...

Hi! I'm here to critique your piece, which really looks interesting. Stay put... ___________ ...of the children in the Dining Hall, “All, sit down.” After Dining Hall place a period ...

Hey, I'm going to critique your piece which is like the perfect length. Ha-ha. Anyways, yupp I'll find your mistakes :D ________ When Firecrow, arrived at the Taku Island meeting ...

Hi, I kind of recommend you go over this yourself and at least find some of the grammar or spelling mistakes on your own. Capitalize your eyes, that's something you ...

Bonjour, I'm here to critique your work [: ________ I look over at her and she is beaming, a perfect, toothy smile and lined raspberry lips. You describe this an ...

Bonjour, I am here to critique this very nice sounding piece! [: ______________ “Oh, Okay.” Can I ask why you capitalized okay? ...she was defiantly someone who could pressure you ...

Hi, hi. I'll be your reviewer since I have reviews to catch up on... Well now that that is cleared, let's get to your actual piece. Great idea with your ...

Part two of my short story, sorry if it's too long once again. Please critique. __________ The dress fitted in all of the right places, just like the costume yesterday. ...

Hey. This is split into two parts because it's kind of long. I switched from present first person to past third person, so if I make mistakes there, please point ...

I received an advanced copy of this book, and I just loved it[:

This is the big boy, so stick with me here for a second. It'll be long, trust me. _______ His eyes brighten, just for a second. “Then get a dress, ...

Again, there's one more guys. I over did it with this modern fairy tale thing. Sorry! The last will be really long. Will you be kind to me this one ...

This is my entry for Stella's Retell Me A Fairytale contest. It's a Cinderella retell, and I hope you like it. But remember, the plot isn't mine, it's the fairy ...

Hi, hi. I'm here to review your piece, it's short so I will probably find little mistakes! [: _________ I get out of my comfy bed, and the floor is ...