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Re: Bella's 30th Birthday
Okay, I really love the story of Edward and Bella. But something in your story catches me every time. I'm liking the story idea, keep going! It's a very nice ...
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Untitled YA
Deleted, I am no longer working on this....
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Leah Lightning Introduction
Alright - now I got that figured out. I really like like your writing. But the first setence doesn't make sense, is it supposed to be 'What makes you think?' ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Leah Lightning Introduction
This sounds really good, but one thing I have to ask: Is this a biography of you? because it sounds a whole lot like a biography. Not being mean or ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: First Chapter of My Novel... Care to see if it sounds right?
We had it all planned out with nothing coming in between them. That is until I got pregnant. Now don’t get me wrong, it wasn’t planned, it wasn’t expected- but ...
Aug 3, 2009