KayKel16

The accident happened so fast. So fast that if you closed your eyes, even just for a second, you’d missed what caused it. What I did to cause it. I ...

This is in the right topic area if you're wondering. The fantasy parts comes toward the middle not the beginning so yeah. I have a loose idea about what I ...

The rain stopped and the principal, Mr. Nesbitt rounded the corner. After Nesbitt place another comma. This is called appositives, it sets off added information. Does that make sense? “¡Ay ...

This sounds like a great idea! I am loving what you wrote. The grammar is actually pretty good. I didn't' find any common mistakes at all. But I did notice ...

I haven't read the other chapters, but since you have no reviews on this one, I thought I would critique it for you [[: !@#$%^&*( “Gary, say something… Please!” Isabella ...

God ’s simple way of reminding everyone that a new day is risen, that a new day is found and a new beginning is here. So... I'm pretty sure instead ...

Hiya! I'm here to critique your work. I'm loving the title! ____ His ocean, blue, eyes were blood shot, and his lower lip trembled. I think ocean blue is one ...

Hi all, this is a little story I just randomly started writing..... Out of procrastination of finishing that last three thousand of my Nanowrimo. Oh well. Back to this one, ...

This sounds like fun, I'm going to try it out. -I've never really thought of plot before, so my plot sucks massively. I think I'm doing it right, but then ...

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I am so behind a thousand! Ah, this bites.

Hey, this is something I just wrote up one day. I'm hoping to create a novel from it. I hope you like it, and please critique! Thanks so much, guys(: ...

Welcome to YWS! I'll be easy on you with this piece, (: I always am anyways. Well, let's get to it, shall we? *** Life was simple I went to ...

Now I find this post, >.< That's happened to me before, and I was always wondering I wanted to write it minutes ago and now I don't? Yeahhh, good post!

Nevermind, really. I'll write it and then get your opinions. It's much easier that way.