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Re: An Ode to Google
Ha ha ha... long live Google! I laughed my head off the entire time...seriously. :lol: It's about time someone wrote a testament to the awesomeness of Google! It was truly ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Sisters
Thanks to everybody who took the time to review my poem! I appreciate all of the comments and advice. I just thought I would mention a few things concerning my ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Fireflies
Hello! I'm new, and I'm not the best at giving reviews yet, but I'd like to try and help you out by offering up my thoughts on this piece. Overall ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: Fireflies
Hello! I'm new, and I'm not the best at giving reviews yet, but I'd like to try and help you out by offering up my thoughts on this piece. Overall ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: The Boy Who Cried Wolf
Wow, I really liked this poem! It was quite refreshing to see the original kind of structure that you used in this piece. I loved the way that it flowed ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: Sisters
Sisters screech and bicker and scream, and pull out each other’s hair; Sisters are always by your side, even when you don’t want them there. Sisters find ways of annoying ...
Jul 9, 2009 -
Re: This Pen is Retired, II
Hey-ow! I found this poem to be enchanting; I thought it was a real treat to read! I loved the imagery that you chose for this piece. Very nicely done! ...
Jul 9, 2009 -
Re: A Little Girl
Hullo, I'm KayC, and here's what I thought of this poem. First of all, I'll start off by saying that I loved the whole thing overall. I thought it was ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Greetings From Planet Random (I'm New...Hi!)
Hi everybody! I'm new to YWS, but I'm really excited to be here! I'm Kayleigh, I'm 15, and as you will probably notice by the time I'm done rattling on ...
Jul 6, 2009
