KattieCurtis

Ahiya there Aj :) First off all can i ask you, what age is this guy? And is there actually something up with him or is he just the average ...

They say when you love someone, You've got to let them go. If they come back, they're yours, no? I let you go, Painful as it was, My darling, I ...

I love this, my best friends moving away in a few weeks and everything in this poem reminds me off her because its all so true, she's always the one ...

oooh this is so pretty :) so so cute! The glow of a fire,that warms me right through;all this I am holding,when I hold on to you. Thats unbelievable romantic ...

I love the rhythm in this poem its just so easy to read and I love the use of questions, make you think and actually wonder whats behind it, you ...

Very dark but aren't we all a bit at times, it's beautiful and I love the emotion you show and how honest you are!! My lips are bleeding,My brain is ...

I shall get working on making it longer ;) Thank you, I agree it needs more to it, an explanation and reason, I know why I wrote it and what ...

As I cuddled into my cotton sheets, I pulled my knee's tight, close to me. I promised there, to myself that I would not cry, I would not weep. I ...

''I want to give him the pain that I have to deal with every day'', thats brilliant!!

Haaa I LOVE IT :D that really made me smile i have braces and do happen to miss school :P

Emm good :) very empowering, not what i expected when I started reading it, makes me wanna get up and do something :P good job! Maybe a bit too long ...

Exactly what I was going for, thank you :)

I relate to this poem so well and i'd say nearly everyone can unless they've been very lucky. Good poem, very honest! I love it :)

''my leaf green eyes '' thats very pretty. Not the absolute best but i liked it, good job for your first poem keep it up :)

Very long but fantastic, very powerfull! I think the short lines work, really made it intense. I love ''I feel your presence Like you were never gone'' good writing :)