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Re: Keep smiling. . .
Sometimes the sun won’t shine, And every year there comes a time when the grass stops growing. You’re not always going to feel ok. But you won’t always feel sad, ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Another Day
I loved it :( :) Oh lord how I know how you feel!! And you potrayed it so beautifully you ledgend!! :D Ok first I like to think your world ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: New Beginnings
I really like the subject first off. I relate to it very well and if you read some of my poems you'll see why :P change is never easy and ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Self Devastation.
Every hour, Seems like a waste. Beautiful flowers And cerulean lakes. Green and Yellow. Red, white and blue. Simply irrelevant. Until I met you. The sun goes down And my ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Meaningless
Ahiya :) Nice poem firstly :) Easy to read and i'm tired! So simple and sweet, but personal by bringing in your mothers pearls mentioned. I like how its a ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
Always a hard question But probably the catcher in the rye by J.D. Salinger, brilliant. I don't know why I even like it so much when everyone I've recommended it ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Why You, As You Say, Lost Everything
HI :) Well written for five minutes my friend, read over it again though. All in all I liked it but it doesnt flow as well as it should in ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Left Behind
The rain pours, pretty girls in pretty dresses prance around the square. Guys in suits, looking awkwardly uncomfortable, and then there's you. Only you would wear a blue polka dot ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: I will learn how to live, when I learn how to die
I blinked, I swallowed, then raised my eyebrows. I wanted to laugh for some reason or to scream. My mother wailed. I didn’t say anything. When someone tells you your ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 6)
Short but I like how somethings finally happening, the build ups dying down and somethings happening, I'm really intrested to see where this goes expecially with the schizophrenia angle, makes ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 5)
Hmmm I found this chapter very different from your previous, I like it and found it easier to read (not that the others were hard to read) I like this ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Five years to go.
Really powerful easy to read poem, I like it. I love the emotion and how it's simply like your talking to your sister (persuming this is true that is) and ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Yet another love poem
Very sweet :) So easy nd so simple, I liked it. Short poems are often the best ones, you didn'd drag on just said how you felt, it's honest and ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: First Love
Everything is even more, When he’s around. I trace our names along the shore, Our love set in stone in the soft ground. I’ve never wanted anything more, Or wanted ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 2)
I like this chapter more than the last one, its less of a rant and easier to read. It's as though he's calmed down. For the world is smothered with ...
Aug 12, 2011
