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Re: Can you help me??
I don't see why you have to change her name at all. The way popularity works, Twilight probably won't be a favorite for very much longer. If the name "Bella" ...
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: I need some heroines!!!
Do you mind french? I've never read any novels about Joan of Arc, and I think it would make a pretty good one. You should be able to get books ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: The Kings Opal part one of chapter one
The Kings Opal Chapter One I was roughly thrown to the floor; the blindfold ripped off. I blinked in the dazzling light, my head stinging from the axe wound. Blood ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Master of the Night - Chapter 1
Great story! I'm not very good at helpful criticism, but I'll do my best. This time the answer didn't go unanswered Did you mean to say question ? It may ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Master of the Night - Chapter 1
Great story! I don't know how historically accurate it is, because I'm not an expert, but the story is very well written. I'm not very good at writing helpful criticism, ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: First page of Jewish History/ Family History book
First, let me say I liked it, it was really good. Although, the way you made Abram "just laugh," causes me to think of Abram as a rebellious child, and ...
Mar 5, 2009
