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Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Dawn Dawn trailed behind the rest of the group, watching the ground as it passed beneath her feet. There was nothing to do now except walk and walk and walk, ...
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: Debts After Death
I am writing a story in which a man loaned money to an organization. Before the organization can pay back the loan, the man is murdered. So what happens to ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Dawn Eldon Dawn shook her head. "I'm sorry, JJ. I don't have a clue what you just said." She shrugged and felt the grass also. "It feels the same to ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Dawn Eldon Dawn followed silently behind her father as he led them through the woods. The others had agreed to go with him for a little while, though she could ...
Jan 20, 2011 -
Re: You Have Your God
This is not a review-- it is just a comment on the point of your poem and the other comments. I am a Christian. I agree with your poem, mainly. ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
*I know. That's why I gave y'all that choice. :) *
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Dawn Eldon Dawn's father nodded, but he stopped Caramella as she tried to walk past him. "I understand both the need to keep moving and the mission you're on." He ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Isabella Dawn Eldon Dawn barely repressed a shudder when the man looked at her. She heard what he was saying, but her mind went in a whirl when she tried ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Isabella Dawn Eldon Dawn gasped at the beauty of the forest and then choked at the sudden intake of strange air. She noticed a few of the others looking at ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
We'll have to talk it over with everybody. Unless Fictionfanatic already knows who it will be... By the way, why will someone have to die?
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Isabella Dawn Eldon Dawn fingered the bracelet, warring with herself as to whether or not she should take it. It was a nice thought, but it went against everything that ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Isabella Dawn Eldon Dawn sat up and blinked at the three people who had walked in one after the other. So much for meeting them one at a time! Then ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Isabella Dawn Eldon "It's really pretty." Dawn said. "Thank you." JJ replied without looking up. Dawn almost sighed. Once again, she couldn't think of a thing to say. Would she ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Isabella Dawn Eldon Dawn wasn't sure how to react. Things had happened too quickly, leaving her with the feeling of having been on a merry-go-round. Dr. Jacobs seemed like a ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Down to the Center of the Earth
Name (full name please, and put your nickname, if you have one, in quotes): Isabella Dawn Eldon (called "Dawn" by everyone except her mother) Age (13-18 please): 16 Appearance (Written ...
Dec 28, 2010