Katharsis

I feel like you wrote this for yourself. I feel nothing when reading this - you should think carefully about what affect you want to have on the reader before ...

A Walk through the Park Chadwick Someone is watching me! Sam walked a little faster as he turned the corner. Oops Sam thought as he ran right into a short ...

The final exams were coming up and he need ed to get the best score in his class. It was early in the morning and Sota was about to get ...

((Sorry I haven't been able to keep up, it was the last week of school and I haven't been around at home. But I'll try and keep up from now ...

He cast another searching gaze over the wreckage, then looked to his company. She was a plump girl, a lot taller than him. Her red hair was frizzy from the ...

Hyley's eyes fluttered open. His first instinct was to call for his mum, but he quickly realised- with a splutter -that his mouth was full of sand. Everything was blurry, ...

I loved it. I wouldn't change it whatsoever, the lack of specification makes it all the more intriguing to interpret. This is something I can genuinely say I liked on ...

Put a blank line between your paragraphs! Other than that, I love it. There's so little for me to critique in grammar and spelling - it makes me warm and ...

Name: Hyley Ridgway Age: 14 Specialties: Hyley can run, fast, though he seems to be inclined to hide the fact, holding an antipathy toward sport and its enthusiasts. Hyley is ...

Chapter 11 Austins Love Child My Dear Fans, Austin Rosstern blogging again about one of my famous interesting days. Believe me, this one takes the cake. This morning, after I ...

It could be argued that this in itself is sexist. The main character is male, the supporting character is female. (Hermione is outnumbered two to one in gender representation, another ...

Thought I'd add my two cents on this. I don't care about the gender of the protagonist, if I can empathise with them then I'm comfortable reading a book. Well, ...

Mae'ar let his body relax, the girl's dog was under control. The creature's questions were answered to its satisfaction, Mae'ar had humoured it with insipid bluntness and feigned idiocy. It ...

Name: Mae'ar Tystharak Nickname: Serpent (He doesn't like the name, though. It just tends to stick.) What is he: A Naga. Age: 15 Appearance: He has the lean upper body ...

“Tonight on Nightline, it was an ordinary morning at Ashville College until the first shot was fired, killing the school’s Principal, Mr. Mike Saunders. We bring you details of the ...