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Re: Can't Fly
Ooh wow I liked this. I found two typos, though. One: "I thought out love was true". I think you mean : "OUR love was true" and Two: "WIll you ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: KABOOM!
Um... wow? Kind of random but I loved it! GOLD STAR! You have some pure talent! It makes the reader happy and joyful!!! Yeee! And maybe a little hyper, too. ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Ma evil wizard!
I have a question: how long does it take you to make these pictures? Actually I have two questions: How big are these pictures? Are they drawn on regular sized ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Lollipop's Gallery!
Those are good! I would like the dragon the best if it did not have those strange stubby little arms. I am sorry if I sound mean... Its just that ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: 2 Arts!
Wow. Nice. I really like the second one because it has a lot of character. He looks kind of like Gollum from The Lord Of The Rings. :D I also ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: For Black Rose
Waao thats amazing. I love how you got it to be so realistic! And I like how everything is in colour except for the rose itself. The only thing: Please ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: He looks...
Wao. Good. In the beginning it reminds me of twilight, with the skin gleaming in the sun and the pale white face. O_o So yeah. That is all I really ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Do you remember me
I put my reviews in bold!! :D I can still remember that day, that day so long ago I suggest putting a period here! I was sitting in the passenger ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Liar, Thief
I liked this piece. It's just that near the end, the sentences get a bit longer, so I would try to keep them all somewhat the same length. Other than ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Nonsense Poems
Ha! I like the second one. Lotsa imagination! My reviews are in capitals. I went on a hunt for a ferplabbit I ran into a big old rabbit. MAKE THIS: ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Beyond the Stache
Ha! I really like this one. You really are quite random sometimes... anyway. I think that the only thing you need to do is: I think you should add a ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Short poem: Door to heaven
Um. I thought tis poem was okay. You have good writing, but the poem itself just does not seem to flow too well. Um . . . here are some ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Cereal
Yay! Finally another person who does not put milk on their cereal! Review: This is a nice and interesting paragraph. You should really try turning it into a poem, like ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Impossible
Wow. This was a really nice poem. I really enjoyed it. I would just suggest having less syllables in the first sentence on the last... part. Where it says: "Hiding ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Knife
Wow. This is truly amazing. When I was reading this, I was so into it it is not even funny. This is some really good work, cooldude! And I saw ...
Mar 12, 2009
