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Re: Cold Nostalgia
Although I don't have any helpful comments to improve your piece, I just wanted to say that I liked it just the way it is! Not anymore. I wish your ...
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Re: Please Come Back
Well, I'm not very experienced in poetry, so I don't think I can be much help feedback-wise, but I really liked your poem. I think it expresses what you were ...
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Re: Cursed
Somewhere deep inside, I keep crying. Pain cuts like a knife, my soul is dying. I don't know what it is, I keep falling. How did it get like this? ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Little Lucifer
Well, I read 'Broken' and just had to see the one before it. I really liked this one too! It has alot of emotion and I get to see the ...
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Re: Too Far Gone
Well, I don't have much to say except that I liked it. The flow and feel to it kept me wanting to read to the end. As a wannabe poet ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Wings
Well, I'm new and not so experienced with things here or writing in general. So I might not be very helpful. I really liked your story, not just because I've ...
Jun 21, 2011
