KatarinaLatisse

Wow, very intriguing! Captured my intrest and held it there. Beautifully done, a lot of wonderful description and emotion to your piece. I especially liked these lines... This beating is ...

Awesome poem! :D Well, I really enjoyed it, anyway... Not a lot of description in it, but simple and to the point, and I can still feel the emotions in ...

Wow, I just wanted to say it's amazing to read this, it almost exactly how I feel sometimes. Also the style and tone you wrote it in is just an ...

A really beautiful piece! :D I enjoyed reading it. I only found a few grammar errors, but nothing big. Yours disappearance is where it originates from. I think this would ...

Nice poem! :) It has an energy and feeling to it that really shares your emotions with the reader. I liked the quick, lively pace to it and really, the ...

Wow, this is really different than anything I'm used to, but I think that's why I like it! :) It catches my attention and stays in my head awhile, gives ...

Wow, I really liked this piece! :) The story it told was a little sad, yet entrancing, with a little spark of hope for the future. I liked how you ...

Short and sweet, a simple poem that caught my eye. I think the ending could have be a little different, it kind of was rushed and cut off quickly, but ...

Intriging poem! :) It really has an air of mystery about it. Nice rythym, but it was thrown a little off towards the end, at least for me. It was ...

Wow, very entrancing! This one quickly caught me in it and swept me away. It has a very melodic quality to it, smooth flowing and an easy rythym to follow. ...

All hearts can break, And lost dreams fade. Such fragile things, Like butterfly wings. So beautiful, so insecure, So innocently sincere. Like spider's lace, And translucent rain. So wavering, Like ...

Nice! I really enjoyed this piece! It really lets us know your thoughts on pain, your view and feelings about it. I liked the way it ended, with a different ...

Wow! I like to think of myself as a wannabe artist, but my scribbles can't begin to compare to yours! Just thought'd I'd let you know I really admire your ...

Well, I liked how it was short and simple, but I'm not sure what was going on here. I kind of get the picture of someone sitting, smoking in a ...

Just thought I'd let you know that I enjoyed this piece! It was well put together and had a nice, smooth yet exciting flow to it. The only thing I ...