KatarinaLatisse

Wow, these piece had so much more to it than the title suggested! I was amazed! :) It's really beautiful. Lovely descriptions, and the somewhat sad, story behind the words. ...

Your vision's blurred, The world obscured, By snow that's falling, Feathers spirialing upward in the wind, Someday they'll fall back down again. Your vision's hazy, The world's gone crazy, Fires ...

Standing here, With this blank stare. Can't feel this rain, Don't see these tears. Something's missing, Something's wrong inside. Not quite right. Watch the world go by. Don't know why, ...

I never saw it change, But there's something different than before. There has to be a better way, This yawning gap we can't ignore. (Again) I'm not gonna stand around, ...

My hand can't really write, What my words can't really say. My tears can't really mean, What my heart cannot convey. Your eyes can't really see, What you cannot believe. ...

I'm disappearing, doomed to fade, Like my tears hidden by the rain. I've lost myself along the way, Now all that's left is this cursed pain. My heart's a hollow, ...

I'm lost on the road of life, Just trying to survive. I don't know where I am, But I'll find my way home again. I'm stranded here on the ground, ...

We are all pieces of a shattered dream, Each desperately seeking our reality. The path is lonely, down this broken road, Lost in the darkness, stumbling and cold. We are ...

I smile, this false smile, A mask of lies, Under which I hide. Will anyone ever know, The true me, so very cold? Like darkness under stone. Beneath this raging ...

Your second poem that I've read, and I was just as impressed with this one! I'm not a very good critic when it comes to pieces that I really like, ...

Wow, I just wanted to say this one really got to me. I guess because I can relate to it a lot. It's just amazing how you expressed your feelings ...

Beautiful and really, very touching! :) I really liked this! Kat

Thought I'd try a different style of poetry than usual, so here's the result. I wasn't sure what I was aiming for, so it kind of came out a bit ...

Short and simple, maybe could use a little more description and detail to convey the tellers emotions more, but nicely done for the length of it. The only grammar error ...

Entrancing piece! I can't give much helpful advice, I just wanted to say that I enjoyed it. Good description, very unique. I liked the style and flow of the piece, ...