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Re: Save me
Just another one of my old poems... "Save me..." Thought I felt you brush past me today. But when I turned around, ther was only empty space. And I stood ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: If...
If... If... I'm an emotional mess or emotionless, who really cares? Should it really matter? Does it change the way you think of me? If... I'm dark and depressed, or ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: You don't have my heart
I just really liked this and wanted you let you know! :D I don't really have anything helpful to say, though. I liked how you fit so much in a ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: How it Feels
I don't know much about lyrics, but this really caught my attention. :) Powerful and personal. I'd really be interested in reading more! I especially liked the lines... No one's ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Thrice the Year
Wow, this was just amazing. I can really feel your depth of emotion here. It's really sad and heartfelt. I can't really find anything wrong with this, except for the ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: My Hope
Wow. I don't really have anything helpful to say, but I just wanted to say, I really like this piece! It's very meaningful, has alot of depth. Very powerful. Take ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Don't Cry for Me
I really liked this piece! It was really sad and I could just feel the emotion bursting behind the words. Amazing... I really liked your description. The structure and flow ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Harmony
Entrancing poem! It has this really melodic flow, soft and smooth. Very beautiful piece! This review isn't going to be very helpful, because I can't find anything wrong! The only ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Just one more day.
Short and simple, but you still manage to get the point across. The ending was nicely rounded off, and the flow was smooth and readable. I especially liked the first ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: How Would You Say You're Insane?
Just wanted to say I liked your piece! Nice rythym to it, it flowed smoothly throughout, no little snags I could find. I liked how you repeated the first sectence ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Ballet of Judgement
Wow, beautiful piece! I liked the imaginative description, and the way you made 'Judgment' into a character. Great job with this, it's very captivating! The only thing that you could ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Pinpoint
Replying to your request. Okay, so for the lines, mostly it's the feeling I get from them, and the way they're written is just so melodic and beautiful. Sphere of ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Morbid
Wow, a lot of expression here! The curtained face, the crushed flower, the girl standing rigid amid a pile of skulls. I think the pink shirt set the mood of ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Vision And Veracity
Interesting story, definately unique! The flow was interrupted a little because letters were missing sometimes and the tenses kept changing. Nice description in the starting paragraph, it drew me in, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Winter In Spring
Wow, a really sweet, heartfelt story that left me feeling good inside, glad I was able to read it! :) Thanks for sharing. I liked the really imaginitary description, you ...
Jun 26, 2011
