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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Save me

    Just another one of my old poems... "Save me..." Thought I felt you brush past me today. But when I turned around, ther was only empty space. And I stood ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: If...

    If... If... I'm an emotional mess or emotionless, who really cares? Should it really matter? Does it change the way you think of me? If... I'm dark and depressed, or ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: You don't have my heart

    I just really liked this and wanted you let you know! :D I don't really have anything helpful to say, though. I liked how you fit so much in a ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: How it Feels

    I don't know much about lyrics, but this really caught my attention. :) Powerful and personal. I'd really be interested in reading more! I especially liked the lines... No one's ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Thrice the Year

    Wow, this was just amazing. I can really feel your depth of emotion here. It's really sad and heartfelt. I can't really find anything wrong with this, except for the ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: My Hope

    Wow. I don't really have anything helpful to say, but I just wanted to say, I really like this piece! It's very meaningful, has alot of depth. Very powerful. Take ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Don't Cry for Me

    I really liked this piece! It was really sad and I could just feel the emotion bursting behind the words. Amazing... I really liked your description. The structure and flow ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Harmony

    Entrancing poem! It has this really melodic flow, soft and smooth. Very beautiful piece! This review isn't going to be very helpful, because I can't find anything wrong! The only ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Just one more day.

    Short and simple, but you still manage to get the point across. The ending was nicely rounded off, and the flow was smooth and readable. I especially liked the first ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: How Would You Say You're Insane?

    Just wanted to say I liked your piece! Nice rythym to it, it flowed smoothly throughout, no little snags I could find. I liked how you repeated the first sectence ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Ballet of Judgement

    Wow, beautiful piece! I liked the imaginative description, and the way you made 'Judgment' into a character. Great job with this, it's very captivating! The only thing that you could ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Pinpoint

    Replying to your request. Okay, so for the lines, mostly it's the feeling I get from them, and the way they're written is just so melodic and beautiful. Sphere of ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Morbid

    Wow, a lot of expression here! The curtained face, the crushed flower, the girl standing rigid amid a pile of skulls. I think the pink shirt set the mood of ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Vision And Veracity

    Interesting story, definately unique! The flow was interrupted a little because letters were missing sometimes and the tenses kept changing. Nice description in the starting paragraph, it drew me in, ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Winter In Spring

    Wow, a really sweet, heartfelt story that left me feeling good inside, glad I was able to read it! :) Thanks for sharing. I liked the really imaginitary description, you ...

    Jun 26, 2011


The universe will reward you for taking risks on its behalf.
— Shakti Gawain