KatTrain

The title made me like the poem before i read it, haha.

Shoot me, I like the french, it gives it character. "Were no longer insufferable or evoking sickness in me" --too long "But then, still whilst walking along" --'whilst' is unnecessary ...

*Unoriginal* Cliche and disappointing, to tell you the truth. I didn't think i 'd see a more 'emo' poem then the ones on Quizilla, till you actually put eyeliner into ...