KatTrain

in the death of Capitalize 'in'. Bring 'time' up back into the first line time, we wake. and in the shade of seas, 'and' seems like it's stuck in there ...

The Artist and His brush Just want to state that right from the get-go, I liked the title I am a tool who’s guided by An Artist’s genius Hand . ...

I know your afraid comma here for dramatic emphasis I see you. i think a comma would work better here sine you're continuing the thought in the following lines Curled ...

This should probably be in the 'song lyrics' section, but I'll review it as a poem. The ideas in this poem are great. I loved the comment about the 'drug ...

If I wer e a car comma I'd be the fuel Moving the engine (stanza 1^) i capitalize f i were a plane comma i"d be the propeller pushing it ...

I forget my age, sometimes- I can feel it drifting from me, as if my whole life is not crucified on the T of a 1, and limits not set ...

Dry; Drier than my chapped lips i dislike the repetition, it doesn't sound 'beautiful' like poetry should That burn when I run my tongue over them, get rid of the ...

Palindromic memories meandered from the blue cello's plangent, hollow heart. The first two lines are perfect, I wouldn't change a thing. The warmth of anonymous listeners regaled I don't think ...

scrape the shavings of my heart use a synonym for 'heart'. It'll sound less cliche. Love the imagery though. from under your fingernails, you clawed from the inside of your ...

Liar, Liar on the wall, Who’s the fairest of them all? Flattering, praising words for me, Yet behind your eyes, it apostrophe here s hate I see. I think the ...

I gave you everything, yet and you asked for more add comma here yet Y y ou are still what l adore comma here But I had so much more ...

I would list them all if there was space. *were :]

You wouldn't believe how much chemo effects personality and the people around you! The tiny pink-puckered dots on your skin, are places where you let the doctors in, with their ...

Press pause on the remote, the one in your mind. you could phrase this less bluntly, show don't tell Examine this frame, a moment in time. Look at her face, ...

Life is Beautiful (comma) Open your eyes (period) I'm just going to leave it at 'remember punctuation' to speak for the rest of the poem. Can you see the animals ...