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Re: Alone
First of all, do not fret about the way you've structured your poem! This is called freestyle poetry, meaning that you can format it however you like. There are, however ...
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Re: Um, hi?
Hi Liegh! Ahhh this is one of the best times in writing! Whenever you start to carve out a new path in your writing and finally discover the one thing ...
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Re: Hey there. I'm... who's that there?
Hello M. Swanson! That's great, I loooovvee poetry so do share some with me :] Is there any reason in particular that you're writing a book? Whats it about? I ...
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Re: Greetings upon ye
Ooo Old English, huh? Sounds interesting. Do you ever just speak Old English to freak your parents out? haha Well, welcome to YWS, I'm Kathryn. If you have any questions, ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Praying for a New Start
Tell me how you feel, Tell me if what we had was ever real. Eee, you started off with a cliche Because now, you're not what you were. Everything we ...
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Re: Death's hand
In the silent darkness, that blanketed the night, delete the comma Death held out a hand, and walked with you a while. His fo r lorn, somber air, cloaked with ...
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Re: Would you say "Yes"?
Before you read this poem, beautiful, This sounds kind of cheesy with the 'beautiful' on the end I’d like you to say ‘yes’. I thank you very much if you ...
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Re: Rydia's Reviews
please and thank you!
May 31, 2011 -
Re: (Un)Timely Reviews
pleaassee and thank you!
May 31, 2011 -
Re: How could you tell I was new?!
Hey Dez! I'm Kathryn and I adoree poetry, so if you have anything for me to review I'd welcome it! How's your fiance? Life? How do you like YWS so ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Will You Fly With Me?
double post!
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Will You Fly With Me?
First off, Make the pictures smaller, they're difficult to read and would be more effective when visible all in one row. Now, onward to the poem! If I were to ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Hi there !
Hey iampaulop (what's your real name??), the best way to do this is trail and error. Post something you have written and we will help guide you through the process ...
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Re: I do believe in commas. I do, I do.
Welcome! :] This is a great site, nothing better really! I you have any questions, I used to be newb-tastic too and have probably made mistakes that I can help ...
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Re: Gossip Halls
I wonder the hallways of gossip. , comma instead. Add an adjective before or after the 'the', There are words like her and he. 'there are' seem really plain and ...
May 29, 2011
