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Re: Pile of Bones
I have never tried this style of poetry. I'm usually quite the rhymer. This is about my grandmother. Rip me to shreds, please. :smt001 A pile of bones is talking ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: jealousy
Ignore the person above me, she is a noob, to be quite honest, and doesn't know how we do things here on yws. Our aim, to remind everyone, is too ...
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Re: this is no longer a poem
Shoot me, I like the french, it gives it character. "Were no longer insufferable or evoking sickness in me" --too long "But then, still whilst walking along" --'whilst' is unnecessary ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: jealousy
*Unoriginal* Cliche and disappointing, to tell you the truth. I didn't think i 'd see a more 'emo' poem then the ones on Quizilla, till you actually put eyeliner into ...
Jan 2, 2010
