KatTrain

Find words that make your tongue feel an emotion and you've got something....

I reallllllllly like this. The only thing i found weird was 'discreetly resentful' 'cause I know I openly complain about the time... but maybe I misinterpreted it? I also like ...

Slender beams of silver moonlight enter this darkened prison as I kneel. I am always cold, always lost. I am frozen here, waiting. This line wasn't as colorful as the ...

The problem with this poem is that you told me what happened. You need to show not tell. The word choice is cliche 'poison, suffocate'. Those might be okay words ...

Wisdom. The way your insight ignites, school's just a launching site. Straight path, you choose to curve hard right. Wisdom (and patience). Annoying how it's acquired by insipid books that ...

she kneels in her garden as if in prayer spine curved, knotted hands plunging in earth. the rim of her straw hat is frayed, the gloves threadbare. her fingers search ...

This is a novel attempt for me, to write romantically. Please, tell me what you think of this poem: Here are my hands They will work for you Here are ...

Love is a malicious gift, Delicious torment, A toxic kiss. Love, from whence this poision drips, Destroys my will, My will to live. This burning pain is all I have, ...

I dodge lightening bolts[color=#FF0000], In a raging storm. I'm searching for shelter, For all around me is darkness. I would dress this line up with a bit more imagery/sophisticated words ...

The cuteness.. it.. overwhelms me.... YES I'LL GO TO HOMECOMING WITH YOU!!! Wait... not for me... sorry about that

Joke?

I don't write love poems, silly cliches that barely pass as a life form on planet YWS. I wouldn't cross my raves on predictable lines, with a couplet about the ...

To KatTrain. Wow, I guess no one can see the meaning of poetry. When I wrote this it didn't come out of the blue. That was just a true attack ...

The poem seems juvenile with the wording, if you're going to go with simple wording, make sure to have a unique way of saying what you mean.

I'm consumed in fire, and drenched with hate... All we need is love, -- boring, typical lines no pain, no worries, no fights. --- boring language As the wolf bellows ...