KatTrain

He said "You're cold and I don't even feel bad saying that. I told you how much I cared and you said, nothing back. I've moved on, left you, in ...

He’s turned me into a typical girl. They said I’m a typical girl now. The repetition of the line was unnecessary, and who is 'they'? I used to like jazz, ...

I am from my dads house quiet, still and peaceful I 'm from my moms house where it is loud but reassuring and safe I'm from accidents in cars where ...

Cliche much? Yes I'm aware. She let him be an escape from all her pain and grief his solicitous words and soft whisperings lulling her gently to sleep He was ...

Once upon a time we were humans. Once upon a time, in a long forgotten land We were independent people, fighting the world hand in hand. But our humaity was ...

I'm not going to nit pick you on this. Everyone has left sufficient (and mainly justified) critiques. However, many people have failed to mention that it is a creative poem ...

I'm guessing this is on the subject of a car or motorcycle or something? Unless you're talking about a dog (shining red coat, all I can think of is Shiloh), ...

I just checked out that poem. It's horrifyingly similar actually. I'm glad I hadn't read it before. Oh and, currently this piece if for 16+, Is that appropriate or could ...

Tell me, does the rain fall where you are? Does it sometimes come pouring down in sheets that hammer the roof above your head, even as the thunder rumbles so ...

To take my mind off things at home I've decided to go for a casual stroll Far away from the things that remind me The people, the silence, the smell ...

I know I may never get her back, add a period on the end of this line of the next depending on your meaning I know that, even as I ...

The first poem was the most impressive. Though I think the second has the most potential. It'd be cool if your wrote about how the subject felt about loosing her ...

I been enjoyin' all the gossipin' and jabbin' but soon enough it starts agin' and I'm cravin' something more for my imagination to feast on. I'm a beast time with ...

Decided to try out prose a bit. Here goes nothing. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "Looks like you're havin' a hard m

I would add something at the end (doesn't have to rhyme). The poem feels uncomplete