KatTrain

There is a name that I know, placed lightly on miscarried tongues and there it lounges faithfully so till embracing lovers' songs are sung. Often used to bait the weak, ...

This is not an attack on men, I know some great guys that would never hurt me like this. This is an attack on what I was told as a ...

With sugar on top?! :]

Eh, this is bad. D: But I have write some fiction for a club I'm in so... here goes nothing. :? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

That's my name! :D I’ll be here for you. delete the period or put a comma after the word 'meaning' When your eyes haze over, And you are blind To ...

My dagger isn’t sharp at all; My gun doesn’t even shoot. , comma instead These lines are very clever, they hook you right form the beginning. Yet I am vicious. ...

Bonjour/Hello/Hola Jamie, glad to have you here. :D Oooo you have an accent. Please excuse my adoration, ahah, I feel like Americans have a fixation on accents. It's okay to ...

Well... (take this as a compliment) I started reading it but I had to stop because it made me think of my former best friend, and it was so true.

Wow! I posted a critique and it didn't show up! ughhhh I wish I was a stone. I wish I were* a stone Cold, unfeeling, dead, stones can't be alive ...

I think the reason for this poem being... rough can be found in the poem, unfortunately. I will definitely re-write it eventually. Kyllorac, Kitty15 I don't think either of you ...

Plagiarism

I wrote you a sad song, But then I burnt it, add some imagery to your lines I bought you a present, But then returnt it, you can put ''return'd' ...

I would definitely choose Ice, seems less painful to me! But metaphorically speaking, fiery, passionate endings are always much better than the creeping hate-filled ones.

Hello Tim, I can tell you that while I'm surprised you haven't looked into online writing forums before, you've finally made it here which is important. :wink: This is the ...

This verbal portrait You've painted with soft words. comma I can see it right in front of me. The smell of her silk washed hair reaches my nose. comma And ...